my band is writing an ep

[mewithoutus]

and i decided to put up a demo of one of the songs so people can give feedback. its folky kind of stuff, but its funny cuz this song is totally a standout like outcast from the rest of the fuzzed out dance rock on the ep. haha.

check it out.

foxes:

myspace.com/foxestheband

[fuzzking]

I dig the singing a lot! Quite nonchalant and charming.
But you sure the song really needs a solo?

Cheers, M

[mewithoutus]

thanks dude. not a fan of the solo?

haha i didnt plan on that at all, i was tracking and it just kinda came to me. its nothing fancy, but it adds kind of a cool country feel to it i think. i dig the solo. if it were too flashy i might have left it out.

thanks for the compliment!!!

[Deckard]

I really like that. Tbh, hand claps are just amazing in almost any song.


Not sure about the very end of the solo tho, i like it up until then, but i don't feel it finishes well.

[fuzzking]

I just LOVE handclaps! About the solo: not that I dislike it -  just felt it didn't really add very much.

Anyway, success with the EP!



M

PS:
Still having fun at the Music Store?

[mewithoutus]

thanks guys. good thing its a demo so i can change things!!!

yeah the music store is still tons of fun. best job ever.

[Deckard]

Definately, i don't mind the solo in there, i just think it goes a little way ward towards the end thats all. I look forward to hearing a more complete version of the song 

[mewithoutus]

right on. the full version for the ep will feature a whole band kinda thing with drums bass and stuff. the claps are staying though.

[Jay]

I don't care for the solo much either.  It would probably be good if it were a quick bars or two and then back but its a bit much like this.  Otherwise a very cool song.  Excellent vocals too.

[mewithoutus]

thanks!!! you like the vocals? its almost my first time actually recording a song with me singing. i dont have much faith in myself as a singer.

SO THE SOLO SUCKS OKAY. haha. i didnt even mean to have a solo, im not a soloist as you can probably gther from that solo thingy.

[Deckard]

It's good to hear that the hand claps are staying  . I think you should see how stripped back you can get it tho. I don't think theres to much wrong with it as it is, i'm sure it can be improved upon but i do like the basic sound to it.

And the vocals are good. Not technically brilliant but they definately have a character and charm.

[mewithoutus]

thanks man!!!

i really appreciate all the feedback and compliments.

[mewithoutus]

wahoo.

[mewithoutus]

ooooh more stuff tomorrow.

[pullover]

I would like the solo more if you used the fuzzed out Jagmaster and then just held the last note until it died out.
It sounds cool, great start!