my band is writing an ep
- mewithoutus
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my band is writing an ep
and i decided to put up a demo of one of the songs so people can give feedback. its folky kind of stuff, but its funny cuz this song is totally a standout like outcast from the rest of the fuzzed out dance rock on the ep. haha.
check it out.
foxes:
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check it out.
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I dig the singing a lot! Quite nonchalant and charming.
But you sure the song really needs a solo?
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But you sure the song really needs a solo?
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thanks dude. not a fan of the solo?
haha i didnt plan on that at all, i was tracking and it just kinda came to me. its nothing fancy, but it adds kind of a cool country feel to it i think. i dig the solo. if it were too flashy i might have left it out.
thanks for the compliment!!!
![Cheesy :D](./images/smilies/cheesy.gif)
haha i didnt plan on that at all, i was tracking and it just kinda came to me. its nothing fancy, but it adds kind of a cool country feel to it i think. i dig the solo. if it were too flashy i might have left it out.
thanks for the compliment!!!
![Cheesy :D](./images/smilies/cheesy.gif)
![Cheesy :D](./images/smilies/cheesy.gif)
![Cheesy :D](./images/smilies/cheesy.gif)
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Re: my band is writing an ep
I really like that. Tbh, hand claps are just amazing in almost any song.
Not sure about the very end of the solo tho, i like it up until then, but i don't feel it finishes well.
Not sure about the very end of the solo tho, i like it up until then, but i don't feel it finishes well.
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I just LOVE handclaps! About the solo: not that I dislike it - just felt it didn't really add very much.
Anyway, success with the EP!
![Smiley :)](./images/smilies/smiley.gif)
M
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Still having fun at the Music Store?
Anyway, success with the EP!
![Smiley :)](./images/smilies/smiley.gif)
M
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thanks guys. good thing its a demo so i can change things!!!
yeah the music store is still tons of fun. best job ever.
yeah the music store is still tons of fun. best job ever.
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Re: my band is writing an ep
Definately, i don't mind the solo in there, i just think it goes a little way ward towards the end thats all. I look forward to hearing a more complete version of the song ![Smiley :)](./images/smilies/smiley.gif)
![Smiley :)](./images/smilies/smiley.gif)
I said no camels. That's five camels. Can't you count?
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right on. the full version for the ep will feature a whole band kinda thing with drums bass and stuff. the claps are staying though. ![Cool 8)](./images/smilies/cool.gif)
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I don't care for the solo much either. It would probably be good if it were a quick bars or two and then back but its a bit much like this. Otherwise a very cool song. Excellent vocals too.
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thanks!!! you like the vocals? its almost my first time actually recording a song with me singing. i dont have much faith in myself as a singer.
SO THE SOLO SUCKS OKAY. haha. i didnt even mean to have a solo, im not a soloist as you can probably gther from that solo thingy.
SO THE SOLO SUCKS OKAY. haha. i didnt even mean to have a solo, im not a soloist as you can probably gther from that solo thingy.
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Re: my band is writing an ep
It's good to hear that the hand claps are staying
. I think you should see how stripped back you can get it tho. I don't think theres to much wrong with it as it is, i'm sure it can be improved upon but i do like the basic sound to it.
And the vocals are good. Not technically brilliant but they definately have a character and charm.
![Cool 8)](./images/smilies/cool.gif)
And the vocals are good. Not technically brilliant but they definately have a character and charm.
I said no camels. That's five camels. Can't you count?
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thanks man!!! ![Cool 8)](./images/smilies/cool.gif)
i really appreciate all the feedback and compliments.
![Cool 8)](./images/smilies/cool.gif)
i really appreciate all the feedback and compliments.
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Re: my band is writing an ep
I would like the solo more if you used the fuzzed out Jagmaster and then just held the last note until it died out. ![Grin ;D](./images/smilies/grin.gif)
It sounds cool, great start!
![Grin ;D](./images/smilies/grin.gif)
It sounds cool, great start!
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