Thanks for listening!mediocreplayer wrote: ↑Mon Mar 12, 2018 8:19 pmI listened. First, I think the guitars are utilized well throughout, providing a good bed of noise here and there. I am more critical of this one overall though: I think it is at least one minute too long. The cool part starts around 2.00 and I feel it takes too long to get there. There is also so much going on and it seems a bit disjointed, like I cannot focus on an overall sound because suddenly something else screams for my attention. Maybe that was what you were going for -- more aggressive and messy like you described it.
Also, I suppose you saved the dramatic singing for this one! Maybe it's because I do not understand, but the singing was also all over the place like the instrumentation.
tl;dr: Shorten and re-mix?
Yeah, this one seems to get more extreme reactions compared to the last one which was a uniform 'well, that was nice.' I think one of the reasons that it sounds so disjointed was that I pushed this one out too fast, and the production and performances suffered for it.
Can you describe what you meant about the singing being all over the place though? I'm not sure if you're talking about the performance or the actual melody itself.